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Post by Deleted on Dec 16, 2016 22:17:16 GMT -5
I thought I'd just make this to share my thoughts on all the RPs I read so you can see me and my thought process on your writing. I'll try to keep this up as I can. You're Gonna Die [v. Hanalei Brightly I]I like the recap a lot for RSW stuff. Big fan and like Rowan for being Ari's soldier. Lucky to be in the MGM. Ooh so the match is a MGM Vs Revolution, I like that. Poor Rowan being all alone. I like the nickname lol. Fireworks. Love the detail on clothing, big plus with me, interesting style and says a lot about her. Nice picture painted with her. She's quite 'vocal' about dismembering people lol. Not a fan of blondes I see...uh oh. Very sinister giggle. I like her point of taking the MGM away. She's a bit of an arsenist...ok lol. Ok Zander and Rowan are a married couple, that's nice to know. Zander's very comforting, good husband, I see why he's married. I didn't know she was a manager, interesting. Lol I like he makes the MGM so on a pedestal and perfect. Awww he's complimenting the wifey. He's a nice husband and don't cross MGM, I'm a newbie & I know that lol. Kiss didn't deflate that sinister singing though lol. I Don't Even Remember Her Goddamn Name [Asylum 01]Mexico! Everyone is going there lol. Trixie went when she faced Judas but we're in the bad apartment, some people just don't do home care. Hmmm, I'm wondering what the girls are doing, Oh...lol I thought maybe they'd be just friends (going to watch the movie with ryan reynolds now over xmas) Deseriee and Ashtyn, ok, together. And they're doing a bit of drugs too, hope Jack doesn't burst in the room like road runner, drugs usually mean Jack Owyns. Well Ashtyn is the dominant girl clearly lol. Ooh Finnish, that's new. She's not interested in titles too, sounds like she might need to meet Noah, they're a little similar like that. Lol No hugs? not very nice. I don't know who stargazer is, going to read the bio. She hates entitled people? she's not going to get on with a few girls then lol. Well isn't she a delightful girl haha. 001 | Time To Get Serious(Already read this one so this is kind of my second read) A nice little motel? I don't know if it is a legit of created place but clearly no room, on Christmas......hmmm. I remember the girls and drugged up.....Jack. Lol they're from his own shoes and Jack rapping lol. He seriously needs some new boxers, shopping trip for him, he's not going himself so he's got to be dragged to shops for new underwear to have other emojis on his boxers lol. A mountain? He must have some money to get that lol, Ashtyn only had a small little tube. Radek is an old character I remember Trevor saying. Not the way to take things seriously lol. Jack and his Jack Daniels.... lol. And he's not a fan of Noah lol. I don't know what Molasses are. He needs to get better for Mackenzie. And WOW I think I misread that last time as him sleeping in the bed with them, not flipping them on the floor....bad Jack. Times Like These (I)(Already read this one but this is second read thoughts) There was one thing I remember was the font kind of made it hard for me to tell 'a's and 'e's apart. I like Trace aka Tracy. Also she's one of the pre-made characters I think so it's very good of you to do one of them. I like the manner of speaking too 'yanno'. That is something that interests and confuses me a little. She does have history with Jack which is a good mention and has me wondering what, but confused as to like how you go about deciding what did happen. And Jack, just roll up some newspaper and bop him on the nose lol, that's the best way to deal with him . Spigot is a new word for me. Now that I looked at the rules book this makes sooo much more sense that she lost to Jack in the finals. And it's better too, it's really stringing on her last loss so really good work. I still like Tracy, she's the short and choppy girl. Hope to see more of her. And Scott, don't be afraid to bring him out. And I like the abbreviation too, So-Cal UV was what I called it mostly but your one is so simple but never thought of it. "Uncrowned King." IFirst...sorry I missed this one lol. It didn't have the "new" flashy thing and I must have been tired so I only clicked on Jack Owyns's rp. Anyway the San Di-Ah Goo was funny lol, I tried to say it out loud, funny way to say it. Also you're style is very spooky because another handler I know formats identical to you so it was a little weird seeing it but I like it (yours is better, he doesn't use speech marks lol). His norm of an attire needs an update, another boy in need of shopping, sweatshirt under a leather jacket is a bit outdated now. But he chose a nice place to do his thing. And it's his Debut? well he's got a big chance to have a main event debut, lucky. You've done good using the past stuff in SCUV, well researched. Broseph lol. He mentioned Deathcore too, I wish I was apart of it that it keeps coming up a lot lol. LOL OMGoodness he did mock Jack's laugh too! LOL I'm very impressed, now wondering if he copied Jack's signature smirk too lol. Lol more drink names coming up too. It's interesting to have a person from Serbia. I am definitely aware he's a money honey man. He's definitely very arroganto but I do like the RP, it was very well done imo. "Down in Flames" // vs. Rowan Blackwood [Ⅰ.]Another former RSW person, and I hope not dead lol. Hanalei has a nice mindset and I LOVE the insight into Revolution. More juicy facts. I liked Bear too, Awww; poor revolution but the MGM was pretty bad ass. She split with Bear More misery for this girl Had to check if Devin Kendrick was actual staff but no, but he's a persistant bugger lol. Ooh I like the setting, matches the image at the top, lovely. Ahem..Queen of California but continue....I didn't either! I thought it was going to be a nice relaxed normal match, I like Hanalei now, she and I are on the same wavelink. Pet Peeve is the speech mark on the "Well, Rowan....it's blue and the rest are white. I like that Iron Woman speech though, she's a toughie. Oh wow! fire to end, she's a little dangerous and both her and Rowan literally play with fire lol. Nice RPs from everyone. I enjoyed reading them Drugs, beaches, fire, I have no idea who is going to win what match.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 17, 2016 17:01:19 GMT -5
Read the newest two, good luck to everyone else. I think we need Alexei to chime into the triple threat stuff that's coming from both Jack & Noah.
Hunting [v. Hanalei II] Awww piggyback. Such a good husband. Now Giant? How tall? and love the clothes. I pictured a saupe brown jacket on hubby, since it's night, something light. Anyway, they look nice. And has me interested what's this piggyback all about? She's very sinister with her singing lol. Oh my! She's hurting a blonde? Rowan's a very bad girl. Ouch, I thought Rowan had claws but Hubby has some bitch in him too, calling Hanalei the joke in RSW. I'm really feeling bad for this blonde lady. She is definitely dangerous. I'm really feeling bad for the poor blonde lady.
"So Here's The Story.." II He's a mac guy I see. And he's very aware of Jack's legacy. Ooh Proper training, OH He knows all of Deathcore too? Noah knows so, so, soooo much. Well Technique vs. Experience is what I'm getting from this RP and Noah's confident technique trumps experience, and then Jack's laugh too lol. Pretty sure Jack isn't going to like that. Noah's certainly confident and arrogant about beating Jack. I'm hoping we get more from Alexei, since it was all Jack in this one. But I liked this one too, love me some Deathcore stuff (even though I knew about that bit)
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Post by Deleted on Dec 20, 2016 23:54:23 GMT -5
So this is for the Asylum show. I don't know Spanish at all lol, so whatever he said is whoosh over my head til I google translate it tomorrow (it is spanish right?) I liked his little intro, he dresses well with the sleeves up. And that's really good attention to detail, totally clashes with her outfit lol, but a cement brick??? I am going to have to get used to So-Cal lol. AND I ACCIDENTLY SPOILED THE RESULT BY SCROLLING DOWN ON THE WRONG TAB...GRRR (WON'T OPEN THE CARD IN A NEW TAB EVER AGAIN). Well now I can enjoy it. I like the match, entrances were nice, poor Micaela entrance mix up And than she takes it (probably like 5% of that rage choking was entrance music, totes) out on Trixie lol. And I actually did like that Micaela got a lot of early offense. I'm looking at it as a very different environment and rules and atmosphere with it and Micaela definitely deserved to be attacking how she was. And I am very interested in the commotion. Then the hard block to the ribs...ouch. But I was very very surprised to win lol. 100% thought I'd lose this one, so I'm in spoiler shock....stupid other tab ruining it. And you do so well and then make mystery people....But Noah is up to something...given Trixie did that before I'm going to bet now Noah might be stacking the deck (or putting a brick in his handbag, new saying) I like the sultans but I have to look up who this Laine person is, I'm at a loss right now. But at least Cortez likes them. Me and him are on the same wavelink...apart from when he speaks Spanish. Wow this match was more of what I'm used to reading. Chairs and stuff I am definitely going to have to get used to lol, they're used so much. Sydney and Reece are definitely going at it and now Noah? Wow. And who is this woman? Hmmm, I'm very interested in the RP I missed by Aliyah. I wonder if Scott was mentioned but at least Traci is here and supporting. I'm very interested, lots of matches have like fans who are people and I haven't seen this ever at all, so I'd like to just applaud the writer/s on that, very outstanding. Charity is there, liked her little social stuff. Stacy too and the boys really slug it out with Charity being like a voice of reason, that's nice. But then Jack...I'm very glad Jack and Noah were a little late to work they missed Trixie & Micaela's match lol . What I take from this match, people are mean to poor charity, she's horrified. Oh no, not Rowan lol. OH NO, not the blonde lady.....Oh my goodness, I seriously am hoping someone saves this poor lady. Hanalei seriously help this lady. Go Hanalei! I need to look up the people but I'm assuming they're medical staff. The match imo was the one that kept me in it the most. I was worried for the blonde girl and hoped Hanalei would win from a fan POV. I'm worried now about Rowan. (Because I have to face her......Oh no lol) Ooh Trixie's doing a photoshoot! Lol that's nice. Oh no, I was hoping Micaela would go away lol, leave me with the very unexpected once in a lifetime win and move on. Oh wow, Micaela is a savage beast lol. Poor Trixie, fingers crossed there was enough of the pre-attack photos to go on the homepage lol. But mean Micaela, mean, mean micaela. Aliyah is taking it to Ashtyn, clothesline into the barricade and a big jump into chairs. Fire extinguisher! lol. Well that was a big one for the ladies. They did a lot, well done to Ashtyn. Rowan seriously needs to leave blondes alone. Poor Hanalei. I couldn't have had maybe Ashtyn? Lesbian over manical blonde beater upper. This fight got violent quick (still getting used to it lol) Pipes and stuff, OH WOW Reece gets revenge and Jack sneaks the win....tsk tsk Jack. Brill match this one, I'll admit I was more enthralled by the Rowan/Hanalei match but this one was all big competitive and violent. At least Noah paid. Lol Oh no....Micaela is coming back....no lol, she already doesn't like Trixie. Reece sure, but Aliyah was a real butt kicker and Sydney deserved a chance, ya'll need to team up on Micaela or she's going to get more payback in the tournament lol, good set up, goosebumps for who is coming back because all kind of have a claim. And it's a definite swerve. And King? Um if Aliyah and Ashtyn win, no more King Mr. Julian lol. Fun show, very fun show. I wasn't disappointed at all (except by self-spoilering the darn show.... ...) but other than that it was fab.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 11, 2017 6:56:14 GMT -5
So after some sleep I can read the show properly. I went to check if Zane or Takehiko were on the roster or in the histories but I didn't find them so when I read the RPs I missed, I'll look out for them. Interested in them Lol anything can happen apparently haha, Jack coming in to fight Beckham again Poor Beckham. Go Charity! Poor Charity Mean, mean Jack. Ooh Julian is making himself known, nicely done lol. Henry Washington...I'll try to remember that name. Well this match is quite interesting, rules now in place. Very interesting match up, Mr. Henry wasn't all too helpful but Larkin won, congrats, now I want to see what happens. Ashtyn is a little disrespectful...I still need to know what Mija means. Oh daughter, interesting lol. LOVE the little history there. Caring dad. LOL Smoking during a match! Wow lol. The dPEEg are a good duo together in the ring, I know the others didn't RP sadly but this laptop stuff is interesting, Anonymous? Well done to dPEEg with your American Influence move. But knew it was Anonymous lol...Of course they say that, of course... Ooh Trixie, and lovely choice of brand and she has quite a collection of items lol. Aww lovely little segment. Oh dear, A SNAKE! lol, Micaela's evil. I NEED to read the CD I saw it posted over the holidays. Ooh subway sandwich and Henry. Mess, he dropped the plate, the mess...WOW even the officials aren't safe. Interesting name lol and she's a good girl. Micaela's match now. knock her down Aliyah! Lol Queen of california, hopefully not. Match was very good, very pulling, quite hectic but I'm growing to know that it's the niche of So-Cal UV to be that way, liked the moments ago bit and also Gunnar lol, keeps on showing up. Well done Sydney! Why Noah? Lexi is here. Nice. More history on her revealed, happy to know that, CURLY CUE LMAO Lol, oh that's golden! Ashtyn has some family, and punches them lol. Oh dear. LOL Top-Notch security who arrive a little late, maybe need to work on the deployment time? maybe? lol, poor Kensi OH! Poor Poor Kensi! Ashtyn is nuts! Ooh Trixie's match with her snake. Well that was a rollercoaster of Trixie vs Everyone to Hana coming out to help, Rowan being soothing after choking and then lighter, snake. I totally agree Rowan should have won, congrats, your second RP was really something. I think this is the first time Trixie has been cut open. AND NOBODY IS TO START THE "THERE'S A SNAKE IN MY BAG" Lark, amending Toy Story's Woody phrase. Sydney is being a good BF, I just got that Ashytn vs. Sydney vs. Rowan can happen so this is good build. Poor Kensi Ooh Aliyah is speaking up against the boss, I hope she doesn't get in trouble later... Aww Hana is checking on Trixie, LMAO at the complaints, well done there. Hana has some patience lol, very calm. She's a good ally. I look forward to that. I'm sad Trevor had stuff going on and didn't get a chance to fight. But the match was quite extensive and I think that is the first time ever in my experience I've seen someone mention a merchandise table..and put someone through it lol. But this match..karma, don't be mean to Charity, Jack. Loved this show, I thought it was great. I don't remember who did or didn't RP but those who did I think got a lovely spotlight, a good 3 stories starting to form here, maybe a 4th (Jack, Charity & Beckham), (Trixie, Blackwoods, Micaela, Hanaleigh), (Cortez, Larkin, Henry Washington (I remembered!), Aliyah?) and then (Anonymous & dPEEg). Great job to the people who were behind show #2, it can't have been easy, loved your work, I'd credit you personally if I knew who was on the team, but So-Cal Ultraviolent Team, You rock will have to do Thanks for an etertaining morning-nearly noon read.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 25, 2017 0:04:48 GMT -5
I have read a few RPs this week while travelling around the city so looking forward to the show. Rowan...lol evil right at the start. and she wasn't even on the matches lol, poor Sydney. I think that is actually really smart writing. Like the "forgetting who you are" because she wasn't booked. Very clever writing whoever came up with that line. And here come the two boys, they're always together lol, probably go to the bathroom together like girls OH MY GOODNESS They're meeting the blackwoods! Also I love/hate the detail to history. Love it because it's so emersive, hate because I keep looking at that history thread when it hits 1000 views, I'm 900 of them. But Rowan is a bad girl lol. #SurvivedTheArsonist just saying ....unless it happens this show... This match was fun, dPeeg are very good in this tag team, we need some teams to battle them, I liked the hype behind it. I'm learning more about them and their sync and moves from these matches. And Jaqui I saw the exchange, but didn't expect this, how nice. Big in Japan is new to me so if anyone could fill me in on them it would be much appreciated. Hailey time, she's nice. AWW how nice she's on the phone and waiting to do her interview. Open challenge, I am not looking at the card yet, see who answers on the show. I remember the Sydney and Kensi was attacked by...Ashtyn? I think. I agree, arsonist is pretty tough #SpeakFromExperience lol. That's some statement lol, I'm starting to want Sydeny to win....but Queen..Lets see how Karma gets Ashtyn. That was a very fun match, with Washington and how it started, really complimented both girls imo. Trixie was funny and Aliyah got harassed, congrats on the win, I did like your RP a lot. Oh well that is a match now, So Big in Japan vs dPEEg and Hailey vs Tyler. BEAR! Lol I read your CD and I was hoping to see you (Everyone is included in So-Cal..So-Involved) Fax? I am not the biggest tech person at all but I thought fax was outdated lol. Oh no lol, have to fight Bear. and Hanaleigh and Aliyah oh no lol. I thought he'd make Bear pick again after Aliyah, interesting. That's always the fun with getting to know the characters, they do something I'd consider OOC but is apart of their character to make you know them more. That really confused me lol the right and left formatting but the story as so fun, they actually got involved this time, taking Micaela down, hitting Riley. I didn't get a chance to read Lexi or Noah's so the result was a mystery to me who won. Very nice Noah's coming back. Ooh we have some fallout. I do think this is probably my favourite story, closely beating the Hanaleigh/Rowan story and the Charity one she sorta has going on. Bloody hell, Trixie's getting major dates, two so far lol. Another match against Micaela....had been avoiding that one lol. Though traditionally we have a shopping brawl before Charity is here, I said her name earlier..speak..of the devil?? (I read that RP about her being maybe sinful lol) I liked this match a lot, I did root for Charity all the way and this dabbling with good and bad is interesting, makes me really think what my 2nd fav character is up to (You'll have to ask me for my fav, not my own) This Angel girl made an appearance, I need to do more looking on her. VERY Interested what Charity does next since she stood and watched. Some security names LMAO he was hiding. Oh that's not nice Henry. Cortez just doesn't like Aliyah or Larkin. Ooh Aliyah is working together. Oh? This is juicy lol. Oh what an opportunity? I didn't even realize, must have missed the title lol. And ooh very subtle lol, 'that' is a loose end. Ah here is the match with the Sydney one. I KNEW THEY WOULD! I KNEW THEY'D GO FOR KENSI. I wondered why they didn't do anything til the end. I don't have to wait! Charity! WHAT! NOOOO, My 2nd fav is leaving! Major Soap happenings this week on TV and death teases of some good characters and now this? Boo lol. I'm going to be waiting for Charity to return. Oh no Blackwoods lol. K-O-C is a funny abbreviation (that I didn't get at first sadly I'm so bad with them) There she is Hanaleigh, wondered where she was. And BEAR (2nd fav now? Maybe... Charity...). Ooh some more RSW history, I love it so much. Said friends...but Bear & Hanaliegh, I can dream lol. This Rowan seriously, leave Hanaleigh alone. Honestly, she's a nasty girl lol. Making me hate her so much. Yeah knock her down Ashtyn lol. Oh my goodness lol, the mallet. No! Don't use it on Hanaleigh. LOL Trixie. Aliyah! lol. WOW Lol lots of carnage there. Rowan keeps hitting people. Very chaotic end to a marginally straight start. I think we need those Lindsay Pierce, Alix Stavros, and Elias Barnes guys to train a bit better at breaking up the fights lol. But lovely show. I liked it a lot, Trixie popped up way more than I expected. HATE Charity is gone, BOO on that, but Bear is here, I have like two matches announced (the most, holla lol) Really good job to everyone who wrote their RPs that fed into this show and then the writers taking all the stuff, even stuff that was a little older and used it so well to entertain me (with interim breaks, over 2 hours i read this) loved it and writers should be very proud (since Charity isn't here to remind us pride is a sin ....) but yes, you can look back at this show well.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 8, 2017 0:27:49 GMT -5
Doing this before bed so forgive my sleepy reactions lol: Oh dear Rowan lol. LOL Trixie's got a nice car, yellow I hope. And Creepy lol, weird Rowan, Gunnar is nice. At this point...I'm wondering on the result...last time I won I got the first segment. So on that suspicion I'm saying Rowan probably won and maybe Trixie did? not sure. Lol theory gone, Hanaleigh got one too, AND bear! lol ok all is up in air again. AWWW He called Trixie lovely I want to hug him. And nice intro, me is thinking Rowan wins for two montage mentions lol. Bad Ashtyn lol, My sleepyness has made me forget who Eve is, but well done to Noah holding a new title and I see lol, interesting alliance. Micaela's comments have me thinking I may have missed something with Tara and company. Micaela's going to ruin it lol, go away and come back after the four way lol Well I do appreciate that little end of exposition I'm predicting the boys win this one to continue their endless undefeated streak lol Poor Ayano, first pull out of reading, he got smooshed into the turnbuckle, and the awkward landing...dangerous lol well congrats to the boys on winning. Gunnar! Lol he's here and Tara EEEEE! Lol he wanted to see Trixie Oh my goodness! Trixie is highly confused lol, I had no idea it would take a big turn like that. I have no idea how to play that off yet and I do need to remember, think sleepyness isn't helping but do remember doctor being involved in like show 2? I didn't know someone had a Pretty Disaster, sounds like a nice combo with Trixie now that I think about it. Well done to Hayley at least I could see her facing Ashtyn sometime. OH DEAR poor dPEEg ol, they got ambushed. Lol Oh no, Larkin is going to be supporting Aliyah, Gunnar not so much support for Trixie now lol and Micaela....things aren't looking good but I agree Queen and First woman champ! Go Girls! OH IT'S UP LOL It was a nice read, I liked the splitting up paragraphs when stuff as split, congrats to Aliyah though! And poor Trixie lol, a bad, bad, bad night for her. I took a little break to read Rowan's RP, NOW I understand lol, fully why she blamed Trixie and stuff, I need to have someone clarify if that's like off-camera or not since it was posted as an RP. Rowan I believe was telling him about doing the deceitful stuff I believe, not sure. And the match was long lol, super violent too, kind of glad Trixie wasn't involved in that one. But it was pretty gruesome with how it finished, Poor Sydney though, I hope he's ok, shards can cut you and with the armbar and everything, hope he's ok Congratulations to Ashtyn though, hope she's ok I liked Kensi was there. And the card lol, Trixie and Micaela main event lol, boo unfair funfair lol. Sleepytime now
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Post by Deleted on Mar 6, 2017 14:33:11 GMT -5
Think you could provide a bitn of feedback for me Trix??
I'll let you wear the pork pie hat....
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Post by Deleted on May 3, 2017 16:04:49 GMT -5
So I thought I'd give the feedback as I haven't in a while. My thoughts and stuff.. First lol, this McDonalds in So-Cal gets sooooo much business lol. And interesting fans as well to be there. Linc is such a title perv lol. I did want to actually venture my guesses for who would earn the date.
Linc I half expected and he'd want the date to be a title match. So when he said all that stuff I crossed him off the list
Riley because of their history with Gunnar and he also dealt with Philip being a pain.
Richard Drake, Tommy Knox were ideas but I did half expect Paige to win the date to shock Trixie. Did not expect Aidan.
I could not actually predict who would win between Dick and Rowan, I had some ideas on some matches and some I got wrong, but that one I didn't know lol.
And the big three things that had me hooked were: Where is Micaela, Noah's plans against Ashtyn and the whole date thing with Trixie.
But then I was so shocked to see Rowan and Knox teased. I'm definitely going to be interested in that one. And I think Rumble Reyes joined Los Renegados which makes Ashtyn all the more in trouble. Has me expecting her to team with Reece and Aliyah as team.
Anyway those are/were my thoughts for So-Cal, new card looks brill, triple threat match looks daunting at first glance lol.
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